I know I’m not the Emily Dickinson of poetry but
I hate
poetry; even the 1% that doesn't suck
as much
as the camera inside it.
I can
recall only two poems that I've actually ever really liked
(Muskrat
Love and Commercial Trash Dumpsters).
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without
the tears this is so where I am.
...just
sayin'
I'm a
little confused...
you use
some phrases that are a little akward...like
At the
last minute a word is waiting
for
another application to complete.
I deny
all technology but my comp
and this
poem sucks like monkey butts,
keep
working on it and work on your self-esteme too.
So what
if it's difficult; writing with your feet is difficult
This
doesn't suck exactly but it is confusing and random,
make it
sound like something a person might say
not heard
that way before and not to be
something
that rhymed but didn't suck:)
Have
someone else who isn't your best friend
just say
it already, we’re dying here.
And the
basic principle is –
the less
you understand it; the better it is for all of us.
The
better it looks, the better it sells.
Kind of
like modern art:
The
better you solder it, the better it works.
Songs are
better than poems, but for me
only
because of the music part.
No amount
of prep will matter or be
repeated
or ever be remembered
because
you will see the signs and leave
when
someone mentions Black Veil Brides
in an
everyday conversation.
When you
understand how to apply
the
principals of hypnosis
in an
everyday conversation,
you will
become a master of influence
and one
of the most powerful one billion
teenage
poets in the world.
Can you
answer this question?
Would you
use the word caveat
in an
everyday conversation?
It is still
shocking, though, to hear
a little
nine year-old girl say, "Asshole"
or
"Goddamnit" or "fuck" or one of the other
four
words of worship,
one that
always had been a household word
like poet
lariat or televised hanging
used in
speaking of the ordinary.
i guess it
worked.
face to face is best I think, for anythings,
everyday
recurrences of living
in a hole
in the ground with
someone
else who isn't your best friend,
not newly
chosen or long considered
among the
most revered of contemporary writers,
the grand
blessing of life, the basis of every virtue.
How long
is a baby considered a newborn?
Or a
matter for comment afterward?
Read your
poetry back to you and ask yourself
Holy shit, I’m an Indie Motherfucker!
Who would
ever have thought it was the one
telltale
sign of grout erosion due to leakage. See
if it
sounds natural, and if it doesn't, how you could
fuck with
their heads, messing with the
saying
itself from the beginning through
the scene
featuring the destruction of the green
planet by
powerful subsonic waves.
An
interesting way to get people to read it,
I guess I
just wanted to see if I could write
in time
to the words.
All its
uses and circumstances to
donate
for a substantial write-off, ask one of the Nuns to
read your
poetry back to you and ask yourself
am I the
writer I want the world to think I am, or can I
win big
at the poker table! Or take a chance, go
all-in, and
utter at
last that meaning of its own
“I Can’t
Believe it’s NOT EVEN Not Butter!” GOD!
for which it had long been the only word
you have previously suggested here.
though it
seems now that any word would do
shitty
poetry isn't defined yet.
Well my
peotry got published so mine is good
and i
want to see your lips move
with over
thirty books of poetry
it's depressing
to see so many people
waste so
much time on being...INTERESTING.
